I’m a little torn about what to do when this chapter ends. Part of me wants to start afresh with a new chapter and a new story, and part of me wants to go back and insert a page or two into each of the chapters we’ve had so far first. Specifically:

  1. A scene between Saffron fighting the crab and finding the frog princess in chapter 1, which is very jarring currently
  2. A scene at the end of chapter two with the team all getting to know each other
  3. A scene between Saffron and Botoxica early in Chapter 3 to better set up why Botoxica’s seems to personally hate Saffron.

I don’t think this story has gone off the rails or anything extreme like that, but I also think the train is moving a bit too fast.

What do y’all think?